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动作描写(一)


如何表达眼部动作
一、高级语块
1. tears well up泪水涌出来
2. narrow one’s eyes眯起双眼
3. squeeze one’s eyes shut闭上双眼
4. one’s eyes fall on...目光落在……
5. look sb. straight in the eye直视某人
6. with one’s eyes fixed on...两眼盯着……
7. tears blur one’s eyes/vision泪水模糊了双眼
8. eyes grow wide with horror惊恐地睁大了眼睛
二、高级句子
1. Tina squeezed her eyes shut and bit her lip. 
Tina紧闭双眼,咬了咬嘴唇。
2. She tried to sit up, her eyes fixed on Jean’s face.
她试图坐起来,目光紧盯着Jean的脸。
3. The dog’s hungry eyes were on my sandwich. 
那条狗饥饿的目光落在了我的三明治上。
4. Tears blurred her eyes/vision. 
泪水模糊了她的双眼。
5. His eyes grew wide with horror at what she had done.
看到她所做的事,他惊恐地睁大了眼睛。
6. He turned his eyes to the door when he heard the handle turning.
听到门把手转动的声音,他向门那边看去。
7. She looked her father straight in the eye and answered his question truthfully.
她直视父亲的眼睛,诚实地回答了他的问题。
巩固练习
一、根据提示,完成下列句子。

1. Anne _________________(眯起眼睛) to see the small letters on the package.

2. She ______________(直视着我), saying something that surprised me.

3. She ______________(闭上双眼) so that she wouldn’t see the horror movie.

4. Lucy’s _____________(目光落在) the painting on the wall when she entered the house.

二、翻译下列句子。

1. 她的目光落在了一张我和她的照片上,这张照片是在我四岁生日派对上拍的。(用过去分词短语作后置定语)
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2. 当James看到公共汽车撞上那辆小汽车时,他惊恐地瞪大了眼睛。
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3. 那位女士低着头,眼睛盯着地板,慢慢地走着。(用with复合结构)
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4. Anne听到父亲的话时,眼睛里涌出了泪水。
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Key


一、

1. narrowed her eyes

2. looked me straight in the eye

3. squeezed her eyes shut

4. eyes fell on

二、
1. Her eyes fell on a photo of her and me taken at my fourth birthday party.
2. James’ eyes grew wide with horror when he saw the bus run into the car.
3. The lady walked slowly, with her head bowed and her eyes fixed on the floor.
4. Tears welled up in Anne’s eyes when she heard what her father said.

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【读后续写】暑假晨背晚练—情感描写Day 22成长感悟Ø 晨背——素材积累
v 句子赏析
1. As I grew older, I realized the importance of setting goals and the value of hard work to achieve them.
随着年龄的增长,我意识到设定目标的重要性以及为实现目标而努力工作的价值。
2. Having been through difficult times, I have come to understand that failures are just opportunities to learn and grow.
经历了艰难的时刻,我开始领悟到失败只是学习和成长的机会。
3. Being surrounded by positive influences, such as supportive friends and family, has helped me develop a strong sense of self-confidence.
身边有支持我的朋友和家人,这样的积极影响帮助我建立了强大的自信心。
4. Learning to manage my time effectively, while balancing school, work, and personal responsibilities, has been a crucial part of my journey to adulthood.
学会有效地管理时间,平衡学业、工作和个人责任,一直是我走向成年之旅的关键部分。
5. Having experienced both success and disappointment, I have come to appreciate the importance of perseverance and determination in achieving my dreams.
经历了成功和失望,我开始感悟到坚持不懈和毅力在追求梦想中的重要性。
6. As I look back on my journey of growth, I realize that the challenges I faced were instrumental in shaping me into the person I am today.
回顾我成长的旅程,我意识到我所面临的挑战对我成为今天的自己起着至关重要的塑造作用。
7. Learning to persevere through difficult times, whether it be through studying for exams or dealing with personal struggles, has taught me the value of resilience.
学会在困难时期坚持不懈,无论是通过学习考试还是处理个人斗争,都教会了我韧性的价值。
8. Learning from my mistakes, I have become more resilient and better equipped to handle challenges that come my way.
从错误中吸取教训,我变得更有韧性,更有能力应对遇到的挑战。
9. By taking opportunities to step outside of my comfort zone, I have been able to broaden my horizons and discover new passions.
通过抓住机会走出我的舒适区,我能够拓宽我的视野并发现新的激情。
10. Recognizing the impact of my words and actions on those around me, I have striven to be more mindful and empathetic in my interactions with others.
认识到我的言行对周围人的影响,我努力在与他人的互动中更加专注和善解人意。
11. In the past few years I have gone through numerous setbacks and difficulties, which are beneficial to my personal growth and development as a matter of fact.
在过去的这些年里我经历了无数的挫折和困难,其实它们对我个人的成长和发展是有益的。
12. It suddenly occurred to Adam that “One should stick to his/her dream no matter what happens.”
亚当突然意识到“无论发生什么事情,一个人都应该坚持自己的梦想”。
13. Reflecting on my experiences, I have learned that success is not solely defined by material possessions or accomplishments, but by the relationships and connections we form with others.
反思我的经历,我了解到成功不仅仅取决于物质财富或成就,而是取决于我们与他人建立的关系和联系。
14. Having been influenced by the guidance of my parents and mentors, I have come to appreciate the value of giving back to my community and helping others in need.
在父母和导师的指导下,我开始意识到回馈社区和帮助有需要的人的价值。
15. Through consistent effort and dedication, I have been able to develop skills and talents that have helped me achieve my goals and aspirations.
通过坚持不懈的努力和奉献精神,我能够发展技能和才能,这些能够帮助我实现自己的目标和抱负。
16. It was Mom who taught me that we should never take for granted the very things that most deserve our gratitude.
是妈妈教会我,我们应当永远不要认为那些最值得我们感激的事情是理所当然的。
17. Growing up, I wanted to be just like my mom. Kind and caring, she always seemed to make people comfortable in her presence.
在成长过程中,我一直想成为我妈妈那样的人。我妈妈善良又体贴,她似乎总是让人们在她面前感到舒适自在。
18. Through our lives, we can gain a lot and lose so much. But being honest should always be with us, as honesty is a virtue.
在我们的一生中,我们会得到很多,也会失去很多。但诚实应该始终与我们同在,因为诚实是一种美德。
19. Taking on leadership roles in various extracurricular activities has taught me the value of teamwork and collaboration.
在各种课外活动中担任领导角色教会了我团队合作和协作的价值。
20. Traveling solo and stepping outside of my comfort zone has allowed me to gain a deeper understanding of myself and what I am capable of achieving.
独自旅行和走出舒适区让我对自己和我能够实现的目标有了更深入的了解。
21. As long as you have a dream, just go for it, and never give it up easily. Your dream might not come true in one or two days, but it will someday.
只要你有梦想,就去追求,不要轻易放弃。你的梦想可能不会在一两天内实现,但总有一天会实现。
22. The golden sunlight slid in Ada’s room, lighting her face as well as the future path for her to follow the dream of pursuing her dream.
金色的阳光照进艾达的房间,照亮了她的脸,也照亮了她追寻梦想的未来之路。

Ø 晚练——素材运用
v 创写片段
当我13岁时,我唯一的目标就是成为我们足球队的明星,这意味着击败我们学校最有天赋的球员迈克。就在9月前,迈克被一辆汽车撞了,失去了右臂。那个赛季,迈克在观看主场比赛时我打破了他的所有纪录。我脱颖而出并被评为最有价值的球员。但是我经常做一些疯狂的梦,梦里认为迈克的事故应该归咎于我。有一天,他对我说:“干得好!谢谢你顶替我的空缺。”这使我从噩梦中解脱出来。虽然受伤了,但没有被打败,他仍然很乐观,领先于我,更像是一个领导者。毫无疑问,从那天起,我长大了,更真实了一点。

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参考答案:
When I was 13, my only purpose was to become the star on our football team, meaning beating out Mike, the most gifted/talented player at our school. Just before September, Mike was struck by a car, losing his right arm. That season, I broke all of Mike’s records while he watched the home games, for which I stood out and was named the most valuable player. However, I often had crazy dreams where I was to blame for Mike’s accident. One day, he said to me, “Good job! Thank you for filling in for me”, which freed me from my bad dreams. Damaged but not defeated, he was still optimistic and ahead of me and more of a leader. There is no doubt that I grew bigger and a little more real from that day on.




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发表于 2025-1-4 08:41:02 | 显示全部楼层

【读后续写】暑假晨背晚练—情感描写Day 23深厚友谊Ø 晨背——素材积累
v 句子赏析
1. Whether we succeed or fail, we always have each others backs, which makes our friendship even stronger.
无论我们成功或失败,我们总是互相支持,这使得我们的友谊更加牢固。
2. Friends are like an umbrella. Whether its sunny or rainy, they will always be there for you.
朋友就像一把雨伞,无论晴天或雨天,都会永远陪伴在你身旁。
3. I nodded firmly, knowing kindness and friendship bloom in both of our hearts.
我坚定地点了点头,知道善良和友谊之花在我们的心中盛开。
4. I came a thousand miles to stand in this door tonight, and it’s worth it if my old partner turns up.
今晚,我从千里之外赶来站在这扇门前,只要我的老朋友出现,这一切都是值得的。
5. Despite our different backgrounds, interests and personalities, we have learned to appreciate and respect each others differences.
尽管我们来自不同的背景,有着不同的兴趣和个性,但我们已经学会欣赏和尊重彼此的不同之处。
6. Although her voice carried a so-what attitude, I sensed she was pleased by the invitation.
虽然她的声音中带着一种无所谓的态度,但我感觉到她对这个邀请很高兴。
7. She jumped up, screaming in an excited voice, and wrapped her arms around me tightly.
她跳了起来,激动地尖叫着,用胳膊紧紧地抱住了我。
8. Looking back, I realize that my classmates have not only been my friends, but also my teachers, who have taught me the importance of friendship and the value of teamwork.
回首往事,我意识到我的同学不仅是我的朋友,也是我的老师,他们教会了我友谊的重要性和团队合作的价值。
9. Watching it hang in the yard, Angela smiled with satisfaction. She called Susan, apologized for her behaviour and expressed her sincere gratitude. She said the carpet was the most precious birthday gift she had ever received in the whole world.
看着它挂在院子里,安吉拉满意地笑了。她打电话给苏珊,为她的行为道歉,并表达了她真诚的感激之情。她说这条地毯是她收到的世界上最珍贵的生日礼物。
10. I could feel his icy shell gradually melting away and eventually I could discuss with him looking straight in his eyes.
我能感觉到他冰冷的外壳逐渐融化,最终我能够直视他的眼睛与他交流。
11. She said that it was my company and encouragement that not only made her happy, but also improved her confidence. For me, it was her sincerity that helped me adapt to a new life.
她说是因为我的陪伴和鼓励,不仅让她感到快乐,也提高了她的自信心。对我来说,是她的真诚帮助我适应了新的生活。
12. She felt lonely and hopeless until I approached her warmly. From then on, we two often learned together and shared happiness and sorrow.
在我热情地接近她之前,她一直感到孤独和无助。从那时起,我们两个经常一起学习,分享快乐和悲伤。
13. The letter was written by Charlie and it read “Thank you, my angel. It is your company that makes me feel warm during the days I suffer from cancer. Please keep smile.”
这封信是由查理写的,上面写着:“谢谢你,我的天使。是你的陪伴让我在患癌症的日子里感到温暖。请保持微笑。”
14. Mr Henry, who was a little shy after hearing the praise, just smiled, saying, “You have saved my life earlier, so a friend in need is a friend indeed.”
亨利先生听了夸奖后有点害羞,只是笑了笑说:“你早些时候救了我的命,因此,患难见真情。”
15. It was on that very day that Mike made his first friend in the new school, and he truly understood the value of sincerity and honesty in a relationship.
就在那一天,麦克在新学校里结交了他的第一个朋友,并且他真正理解了真诚和诚实在一段关系中的价值。

Ø 晚练——素材运用
v 创写片段
上个周末,我的同学们组织了一个充满乐趣的活动,我觉得非常有意思。我们从公园野餐开始,一起聊天、笑声不断。之后,我们进行了一场足球比赛,非常有趣和激烈。看到大家互相欢呼、击掌,我意识到我们的友谊是多么的坚固。太阳开始落山时,我们决定用烧烤晚会来结束这一天。有些人在烤汉堡和热狗,其他人则在跟着音乐唱歌、跳舞。这是一个难忘的经历,让我们更加亲近。

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参考答案:
Last weekend, my classmates organized a fun-filled activity, which I found extremely enjoyable. Starting with a picnic in the park, we had a great time chatting and laughing together. Afterward, we played a game of football, which was really fun and competitive. Seeing everyone cheering and high-fiving each other, I realized how strong our friendship was. As the sun began to set, we decided to wrap up the day with a barbecue party. While some were grilling burgers and hot dogs, others were singing and dancing to the music. It was a memorable experience that brought us even closer together.


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【读后续写】暑假晨背晚练—情感描写Day 24爱心助力
Ø 晨背——素材积累
v 句子赏析
1. The kind young man, seeing the lost child wandering aimlessly in the street, took him by the hand and led him safely to his parents.
这位善良的年轻人看到迷路的孩子在街上徘徊,他牵起孩子的手将他安全地带回到了父母身边。
2. A woman, whose car broke down on the highway, was grateful when a passerby stopped to offer her a ride to the nearest gas station.
一位女士的车在高速公路上抛锚了,当一位路人停下来提供她搭车到最近的加油站时,她感激不尽。
3. A teenage boy, hearing the cries for help from a distressed swimmer, quickly jumped into the water to save him from drowning.
一名十几岁的男孩听到一名游泳者的求救声后,迅速跳入水中将他从溺水中救了出来。
4. Now, I was definitely grateful to her for extending a helpful hand.
现在,我非常感谢她伸出援手。
5. Arriving home, I wrote to him and his wife a thank-you note for doing me a favour.
回到家后,我给他和他的妻子写了一封感谢信,感谢他们对我的帮助。
6. From then on, I definitely believe that a far-off relative is not as helpful as a near neighbor.
从那时起,我绝对相信远亲不如近邻。
7. Surprised and moved, the mother stood rooted to the ground, and then bowed low to us, weeping tears of joy.
这位母亲惊讶而感动地站在原地,然后向我们深深地鞠了一躬,喜极而泣。
8. Many years have passed, but I will never forget the lesson Arthur taught me: life is meaningful when you help someone in trouble.
许多年过去了,但我永远不会忘记Arthur给我的教训:当你帮助有困难的人时,生活才是有意义的。
9. We wrote out a small card, wishing her a happy birthday and thanking her for the warmth and happiness she brought to us.
我们写了一张小卡片,祝她生日快乐,并感谢她给我们带来的温暖和快乐。
10. I made up my mind to pass the love to others. Just as a saying goes: “The rose’s in her hand, the flavor in mine.”
我决定把爱传递给别人。就像谚语所说:“赠人玫瑰,手留余香。”
11. In a flash, with tears welling up in my eyes, I was touched beyond words. I felt so warm as if there were nine suns in my chest.
刹那间,我热泪盈眶,感动得难以言表。我觉得很温暖,就好像胸口有九个太阳。
12. “My car broke down on the highway and without her help, I would never have made it home in my high heels,” she continued, exposing her blistered ankles.
“我的车在高速公路上抛锚了,如果没有她的帮助,我就永远不可能穿着高跟鞋回家了。”她继续说道,露出了被水泡覆盖的脚踝。
13. Molly and Shawn met on Tuesday, and she said she couldn’t thank him enough and everyone involved in for what they did for her.
MollyShawn在星期二见面,她说她非常感谢他和所有参与其中的人为她所做的一切。
14. “It was nice to meet him and thank him, because I wouldn’t be here if it weren’t for him,” Molly said. “He and Adam are the ones that jumped in and saved me, and they deserve all the praise in the world as far as I’m concerned.”
“很高兴见到他并感谢他,因为如果不是他,我就不会在这里了。”Molly说。“他和Adam是那些跳进来救我的人,我认为他们应该得到世界上所有的赞扬。
15. Having spent a tough year littered with severe hardship, I cried my heart out in my Jeep on this deserted road for the kindness from some strangers.
经历了一年的艰辛和困难,在这条荒凉的路上,我独自坐在吉普车里,为一些陌生人的善良而痛哭流涕。
Ø 晚练——素材运用
v 创写片段
朱莉娅(Julia)一听到他说的话,立刻开始担心起来。她放下手中的一切,迅速拨打紧急电话,冲向男孩的家。从辛西娅(Cynthia)的身体状况判断,她怀疑(小男孩的)祖母可能中风了。很明显,这个男孩很害怕,脸色苍白。朱莉娅不假思索地开始帮助他们。她找了一条毯子让辛西娅暖和起来,同时温柔地和男孩说话让他平静下来。
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参考答案:
Upon hearing what he said, Julia immediately became concerned. Therefore, she dropped everything in hand, quickly dialed the emergency number and rushed to the boys home. Judging from Cynthias physical condition, she suspected the grandmother might be suffering from a stroke. Meanwhile, it was obvious that the boy was frightened, his face pale. Without thinking twice, Julia set out to help them/set about helping them/got down to helping them. She found a blanket to keep Cynthia warm, while talking to the boy gently to calm him down.

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【读后续写】暑假晨背晚练—情感描写Day 25比赛收获
Ø 晨背——素材积累
v 句子赏析
1. As the final whistle blew, a sense of triumph flooded over me as I realized that all of our hard work had paid off.
当终场哨声吹响时,一种胜利的感觉涌上心头,因为我意识到我们所有的辛勤工作都得到了回报。
2. The cheers from the crowd echoed through the stadium, and I couldn’t help but feel a rush of excitement as I basked in the glory of our victory.
人群的欢呼声回荡在体育场内,当我沉浸在胜利的荣耀中时,我不禁感到一阵兴奋。
3. Despite the physical and mental exhaustion, I couldn’t wipe the smile off my face as I reflected on the incredible memories and lessons learned from the competition.
尽管身心疲惫,当我回想起了从比赛中学到的令人难以置信的回忆和教训,我还是无法抹去脸上的笑容。
4. As we celebrated our win, I couldn’t help but feel grateful for the opportunity to be part of such an amazing team and to have pushed myself to my limits.
当我们庆祝胜利时,我不禁感到感激有机会成为这样一个了不起的团队的一员,并将自己推向极限。
5. After months of training and hard work, I finally crossed the finish line of the marathon, my heart bursting with pride and satisfaction.
经过几个月的训练和努力,我终于冲过了马拉松的终点线,心中充满了自豪和满足。
6. As the final whistle blew, our team erupted into cheers and high-fives, basking in the glory of our hard-earned victory.
随着终场哨声吹响,我们的团队爆发出欢呼声和击掌声,沉浸在我们来之不易的胜利的荣耀中。
7. Despite the rain pouring down on us, the thrill of competing in the championship game kept our spirits soaring, and we emerged triumphant in the end.
尽管下着倾盆大雨,但参加冠军赛的快感让我们精神振奋,最终我们取得了胜利。
8. With beads of sweat running down my face and my heart pounding in my chest, I knew that the grueling hours of practice had paid off as I claimed the top spot on the podium.
汗珠顺着我的脸流下来,我的心在胸腔里怦怦直跳,我知道艰苦的练习时间得到了回报,因为我在领奖台上占据了头把交椅。
9. Even in defeat, I felt a sense of accomplishment and growth, knowing that every moment on the field had taught me something new and valuable.
即使失败,我也感到成就感和成长感,知道球场上的每一刻都教会了我一些新的和有价值的东西。
10. When my turn came, I mustered up courage and stepped onto the platform.
轮到我的时候,我鼓足勇气走上了讲台。
11. I spoke in a nervous voice and even stuttered a few times as I forgot parts of the story. My legs trembled and so did my voice.
我说话声音紧张,甚至结巴了几次,因为我忘记了故事的一部分。我的腿在颤抖,我的声音也在颤抖
12. Then, along with the first note of music, Emily began to sing her heart out. Her voice was like a nightingale ringing in the auditorium.
接着,随着音乐的第一个音符,爱米丽开始放声歌唱。她的声音像夜莺在礼堂里鸣叫。
13. So dynamic was he that he swam swifter than ever. With his arm waving, he cut through the water smoothly like a flying fish.
他活力四射,游得比以前更快了。他挥动着手臂,像飞鱼一样平稳地划水。
14. It takes me a while to notice the roar of the audience’s cheers thundering all around the landscape.
过了一段时间,我才注意到观众的欢呼声响彻了整个舞台。
15. After I finished, the audience burst into thunderous applause.
我说完后,全场爆发出雷鸣般的掌声。
16. Upon finishing the talk, I trotted towards Mareya and gave her a bear hug. Meanwhile, thunderous applause rang through the classroom.
演讲结束后,我快步走向Mareya,给了她一个大大的拥抱。与此同时,教室里响起了雷鸣般的掌声。
17. When the curtain opened up, the eyes of the whole audience fell upon Emily. “Emily White!” someone whispered.
幕布拉开时,所有观众的目光都落在了Emily身上。Emily White!”有人小声说。
18. One woman got up and began to animatedly dance about the room. Some of the people swayed in their chairs to the beat of the music while others tapped theirs toes. The performance ended up with a storm of applause from the crowd.
一个女人站了起来,开始在房间里活跃地跳舞。有些人随着音乐的节拍在椅子上摇摆,而另一些人则用脚尖敲击。演出在观众暴风雨般的掌声中结束。
19. No cheers filled the air when I finished my show. The end of our run was met with surprised silence.
当我结束我的节目时,没有欢呼声。我们的表演遭遇了令人不可思议的沉默。
20. I could feel that all the eyes were fixed on us. A strong sense of nervousness surged through me.
我能感觉到所有的眼睛都盯着我们。一种强烈的紧张感涌上我的全身。
21. Then the next few minutes witnessed fierce competition between other groups.
接下来的几分钟里,其他组之间展开了激烈的竞争。
22. Standing in front of the line, Emily felt her throat tight and her palms sweating.
站在队伍前面,Emily感到喉咙发紧,手心冒汗。
23. With that and all the high fives and the cheers of the day, the best prize that I walked away with was my confidence.
有了这些和今天所有的击掌和欢呼,我带走的最好的奖品就是我的信心。
24. With his heart pounding quickly, Mike was so nervous that his legs and arms began to lose power.
Mike的心怦怦直跳,他紧张得双腿和手臂都开始失去力量。
25. Then they were all clapping, yelping their praises, telling me how proud I’d made them all.
然后他们都鼓掌,大声赞扬,告诉我我让他们感到多么自豪。
26. It is not the lucky charm brought by ice-cream but his own diligence, persistence and confidence that contribute to his success in swim meet.
不是冰激凌带来的幸运魅力,而是他自己的勤奋、坚持和信心,使他在游泳比赛中获得成功。
Ø 晚练——素材运用
v 创写片段
热身后,我准备好了参加1500米赛跑,等着被带领到起跑线。我正看着和我年龄相仿的女孩在起跑线上排队时,突然听到一声枪响。我的心沉了下去,因为我担心我所做的训练都白费了。我内心深处有一种力量促使我赢得比赛。我的心怦怦直跳,我尽最大的努力,与其他跑步者更接近了。在人们兴奋的欢呼声中,我越过了终点线!我成功了!
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参考答案:
After warming up, I was ready for the 1,500-meter race, waiting to be guided to the starting line. I was watching girls of my age lining up at the starting line when I heard a gunshot. My heart dropped, because I was afraid all the training that I had done was wasted. Yet there was something inside me pushing me to win the competition. My heart beating wildly, I tried my best and got closer to the other runners. Eventually, with people cheering excitedly around, I crossed the finishing line! I made it!

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【读后续写】暑假晨背晚练—情感描写Day 26哀愁压抑
Ø 晨背——素材积累
v 句子赏析
1. The frosty air blew in, cutting like knife.
寒冷的空气吹进来,如同刀割般的感觉。
2. The rain came pouring down, the streams rose, and the winds blew and beat against the house.
雨倾盆而下,洪流猛涨,狂风在肆意地冲击着房屋。
3. On that dark and stormy night, the waves were crashing and the winds were howling.
在那个漆黑的暴风雨之夜,海浪在肆意地拍打着,劲风在愤怒地咆哮着。
4. The kids were frightened as the wind blew several trees on their side and the light continued to come and go in the sky.
风猛刮着身侧的树木,闪电在空中持续乱舞,孩子们吓坏了。
5. The night was very quiet, so even the slightest sound made the boys jump from fear.
晚上非常安静,所以即使是最轻微的声音也让男孩们吓得跳了起来。
6. The sky is overcast, darkened with gloomy clouds.
乌云密布,黑云压顶。
7. The thin tees were blowing wildly and untidy gray crowds were sailing past a pale, sickly moon.
细弱的小树猛烈地摇摆着,乱七八糟、奇形怪状的黑云飘过苍白昏暗的月亮。
8. The sky was overcast, and the whole world seemed to be enveloped in a huge gray quilt.
天空阴云密布,整个世界似乎都被一床巨大的灰色被子所笼罩。
9. Black clouds hurried across the sky, and the trees moved wildly in the wind. The rain made a loud noise on the window.
乌云在天空中匆匆飘过,树在狂风中猛烈地摇摆。雨打在窗子上弄出了很大的响声。
Ø 晚练——素材运用
v 创写片段
描写考试后去教师办公室的情景(可以考虑人物本身或周围环境来丰富内容)
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Finally, it was time to face the music. I struggle to my feet from my seat and slowly made my way to the door. I was soon greeted with a stream of cold air rushing through the open door. I went along the dimly lit hallway. A sudden gust of cold wind made me shiver. It was really cold outside, I thought. After what seemed a long time, I came to the office. Through the glass window I could see Mr. Xu in front of a computer, eyes glued to the screen. I could even hear his fingers hitting the keyboard hard from time to time. After a minutes hesitation, I pushed the door open. Mr. Xu looked away from his computer, adjusted his glasses and stared directly into my eyes. My cheeks were glowing with embarrassment. I could figure out what he was to say. My heart missed a beat. My mind went blank and my mouth dry.



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