21-23高考真题应用文合集

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高考真题
高考题型: 书面表达 » 历年真题
目录
一、应用文真题    2
1. 2024年1月浙江    2
2. 2023年6月新1/2卷    2
3. 2023年6月甲卷    3
4. 2023年6月乙卷    3
5. 2023年1月浙江    3
6. 2022年6月新1/2卷    4
7. 2022年6月甲卷    4
8. 2022年6月乙卷    5
9. 2022年6月浙江    5
10. 2022年1月浙江    6
11. 2021年6月新1/2卷    6
12. 2021年6月甲卷    6
13. 2021年6月乙卷    7
14. 2021年6月浙江    7
15. 2021年1月浙江    8
二、应用文真题参考范文    9
1. 2024年1月浙江 参考范文    9
2. 2023年6月新1/2卷 参考范文    10
3. 2023年6月甲卷 参考范文    11
4. 2023年6月乙卷 参考范文    12
5. 2023年1月浙江 参考范文    12
6. 2022年6月新1/2卷 参考范文    13
7. 2022年6月甲卷 参考范文    14
8. 2022年6月乙卷 参考范文    15
9. 2022年6月浙江 参考范文    17
10. 2022年1月浙江 参考范文    18
11. 2021年6月新1/2卷 参考范文    18
12. 2021年6月甲卷 参考范文    19
13. 2021年6月乙卷 参考范文    20
14. 2021年6月浙江 参考范文    20
15. 2021年1月浙江 参考范文    21
一、应用文真题
1.2024年1月浙江
请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿,向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动,内容包括:
1.介绍这项运动;
2.说明推荐理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答:
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
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2.2023年6月新1/2卷
假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括;
1. 说明问题;
2. 提出建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
3.2023年6月甲卷
你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.人物简介及事迹;
2. 意义或启示。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 题目已为你写好。
A Historical Figure in China
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4.2023年6月乙卷
学校英报组织同学们分享自己在假期中学到的新技能,请你以此为主题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1.简要描述;
2.体验和感受。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 题目已为你写好。
Learn a new skill
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5.2023年1月浙江
上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道, 内容包括:
1. 活动的过程;
2. 收获与感想。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
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6.2022年6月新1/2卷
假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括:
1.节目介绍;
2.访谈的时间和话题。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
7.2022年6月甲卷
你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题,举办英语征文比赛,请你写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括:
1. 海洋的重要性;
2. 保护海洋的倡议。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
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8.2022年6月乙卷
学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 学习活动状况描述:
2. 简单评论;
3. 你的建议。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
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9.2022年6月浙江
假定你是李华,你校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”,请你给你的留学生同学Michael写一封信,邀请他一同体验,内容包括:
1.位置与开放时间;
2.室内设施和功能。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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10.2022年1月浙江
假定你是李华,在“中国一爱尔兰文化节”活动中结识了爱尔兰朋友Chris,现在他已回国,请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.回忆活动经历;
2.分享个人收获;
3.希望保持联系。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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11.2021年6月新1/2卷
你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 读报的经历;
2. 喜爱的栏目;
3. 期望和祝福。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式写字答题卡的相应位置作答。
Youth and Me
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12.2021年6月甲卷
假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会,并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris,向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括:
1. 阐明写信事由;
2. 征求建议;
3. 表示感谢。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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13.2021年6月乙卷
你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Be smart online learners 为题写一篇发言稿参赛,内容包括:
1.分析优势与不足:
2.提出学习建议。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.题目和首句已为你写好。
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14.2021年6月浙江
昨天你参观了学校举办的学生国画作品展。请给校英文报写一篇宣传稀,内容包括:
1. 展览时间、地点;
2. 观展感受;
3. 推荐观展。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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15.2021年1月浙江
假定你是李华,下周有新西兰学生访问你校,你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。请为此写一篇发言稿,内容包括:
1. 表示欢迎;
2. 介绍活动安排;
3. 表达祝愿。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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二、应用文真题参考范文
1.2024年1月浙江 参考范文
【思路点拨】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿,向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动。
【参考范文】
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
Everybody! Are you tired of sitting in class all day? How about incorporating some physical activity into your daily routine? One great option is the “Stand Up and Stretch” exercise. This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. It’s a quick and easy way to get your blood flowing and re-energize your body and mind. This exercise is recommended for several reasons.
First, it helps to combat the negative effects of prolonged sitting, such as back pain and stiffness. Second, it can improve your focus and concentration, making it easier to stay engaged in class. Lastly, it promotes a healthy and active lifestyle, which is essential for overall well-being.
So, next time you feel a bit sluggish during class, remember to stand up and stretch! It’s a small change that can make a big difference in your day.
【高分词汇】
1.be tired of→be fed up with厌倦
2.first→above all首先
3.combat→relieve减轻
4.improve→enhance提高
【句式升级】
This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths.(改写成复合句)
→This is a simple routine that involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths.
【高分句式】
1.Lastly, it promotes a healthy and active lifestyle, which is essential for overall well-being. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
2.This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. (运用了动名词作宾语)
3.It’s a small change that can make a big difference in your day. (运用了that引导的定语从句)
2.2023年6月新1/2卷 参考范文
【参考范文】
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together.
    Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇是应用文写作,要求考生给外教写一封邮件,告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
首先:to begin with → first of all
提高:improve → progress
建议:suggestion → advice
选择:choose → select
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
拓展句:My suggestion is that we are supposed to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve.(运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2]
Besides, Students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.(运用了省略句和who引导定语从句)
3.2023年6月甲卷 参考范文
【参考范文】
Confucius is a well-known figure in Chinese history. His teachings emphasized the importance of moral values, respect for elders, and social harmony. Confucius traveled throughout the country, imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society.
The significance of Confucius cannot be overstated. His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, fostering respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge. Even today, his ideas continue to guide individuals and communities in China and beyond.
Confucius’s life offers valuable lessons. He stressed the self-cultivation, respect for elders, and the pursuit of knowledge, which serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world. His teachings remind us of the importance of integrity, compassion, and social responsibility.
4.2023年6月乙卷 参考范文
【参考范文】
When I was in my primary school, I had an opportunity to attend a musical contest held in my school. That was the first time I watched a live musical performance. The fantastic players touched me deeply.
I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for beginner. In the beginning, it was quite difficult to read the notes on the stave. However, it did not demoralize me. I spent most of my leisure hours to practice piano. Although my fingers were painful after few hours practice, I felt satisfied if I could play a music piece completely.
Even though I will not pursue as my life career, I will still continue learning and playing piano as my hobby. It is simply because music is the best medication for my soul.
5.2023年1月浙江 参考范文
【参考范文】
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
Last weekend,I participated in a "Getting to Know the Plants Around Us"activity organised by our Students' Union.
The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist,who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species.We then went on a natural walk to observe and collect samples of different plants.Throughout the event,I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes,as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals.I also gained a greater appreciation for the role that plants play in maintaining the balance of our ecosystem.Overall,it was a valuable and enriching experience.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报写篇报道,介绍上周末校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参与:participate in→attend开始;begin →star
观察,词查:observe →survey吉境:strike →astonish/surprise
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:  Last weekend,I participated in a "Getting to Know the Plants Around Us"activity organised by our Students' Union.
拓展句:  Last weekend,I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us”activity organised by our Students' Union,which benefited me a lot.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】
The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist,who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species.(运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】
Throughout the event,I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes,as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals.(运用了一般过去时的被动语态和定语从句)
6.2022年6月新1/2卷 参考范文
【参考范文】
Dear Caroline,
This is my first time that I have invited you to attend our program —Talk and Talk. It is ten years since Talk and Talk was established. This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students. Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it. As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot. If you are available on this Sunday, I together with the whole Talk and Talk staff am waiting for your coming. I’d appreciate it if you take my invitation into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,假定你是校广播站“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
建立:establish→set up
了不起的:amazing→fabulous
帮助:aid→assistance
许多:plenty of→a lot of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot.
拓展句:You are our distinguished foreign language teacher, whose aid can help us a lot.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students.(运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]
Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it.(运用了状语从句的省略)
7.2022年6月甲卷 参考范文
【参考范文】
When it comes to ocean, its pollution is becoming more and more serious. World Ocean Day, falling on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.
Ocean plays a key role in our world. Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature. Thus, it is imperative to protect ocean. First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions. For example, garbage can’t be thrown into ocean. What’s more, we can also hand out leaflets to call on more people to protect the ocean. The more people are involved, the better the ocean environment is.
All in all, it is high time that we devoted ourselves to protecting ocean. To protect ocean is to protect ourselves.
【解析】
【导语】本文是一篇应用文,就世界海洋日为主题向英文征文比赛投稿,阐述海洋的重要性并提出一些建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
越来越:more and more→increasingly
重视:place importance on→attach importance to
重要的:key→significant
此外:what’s more→furthermore
2句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:World Ocean Day, falling on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.
拓展句:World Ocean Day, which falls on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature.(运用了部分倒装结构)
[高分句型2]
When it comes to ocean, its pollution becoming more and more serious.(使用了固定句型)
[高分句型3]
First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions.(使用了主语从句)
8.2022年6月乙卷 参考范文
【参考范文】
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the classroom in various ways.
It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%.
As far as I’m concerned, it is a disturbing trend. For students, what benefits most to their study is reading English books. Because of their lack of self-discipline, they’re more easily addicted to chatting online or playing games. It’s urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline, and it’s also urgent for parents and teachers to strengthen the guidance.
【解析】
【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文。要求考生请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文给学校英文报投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
选择:choose→select
提高:improve→strengthen
各种各样的:various→diverse
就我而言:as far as I’m concerned→from my perspective
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the Classroom in various ways.
拓展句:Nowadays, because smartphones and computers are becoming more and more popular, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the Classroom in various ways.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】
It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%.(运用了it作形式主语,that引导主语从句以及who引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】
It's urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline(运用了it作形式主语,to improve their self-discipline为真正的主语)
9.2022年6月浙江 参考范文
【参考范文】
Dear Michael,
Good news ! Recently, a newly-furnished section, consisting of eight Group Learning Rooms, has been open to us students in our school library.
Located on the third floor beside the online reading rooms, it can be accessible from 8 am till 9 pm throughout the weekdays. Those rooms are equipped with modern electronic facilities, all of which are linked to the Internet. It’s really convenient for us to do some group projects. Why not ask our group members to go and experience it?
Early reply and we can reserve one room for our project.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,假定考生是李华,你校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”,请你给你的留学生同学Michael写一封信,邀请他一同体验。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
由……组成:consist of→ be made up of
位于:be located on→ be situated on
与……相连接: be linked to →be connected to
预定:reserve→book
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Recently, a newly-furnished section, consisting of eight Group Learning Rooms, has been open to us students in our school library.
拓展句:Recently, a newly-furnished section, which consists of eight Group Learning Rooms, has been open to us students in our school library.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
Those rooms are equipped with modern electronic facilities, all of which are linked to the Internet.(of which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]
Located on the third floor beside the online reading rooms, it can be accessible from 8 am till 9 pm throughout the weekdays.(过去分词作状语)
10.2022年1月浙江 参考范文
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
How is everything? I have missed you very much since you returned to Ireland.
I still remember the moments we spent together at the China-Ireland Cultural Festival. We went to lectures on culture by leading scholars from both our countries. We also enjoyed music, dance, dramas and films.
I gained a better understanding of Irish culture during the festival, which has great significance for the cultural exchanges between China and Ireland. What's more, a close friendship has been formed between us.
Let's keep in touch. Hope to see you again.
Yours,
Li Hua
11.2021年6月新1/2卷 参考范文
【参考范文】
Youth and Me
It has been 10 years since Youth was founded. In my memory, it is Youth that accompanies me through my whole high school. When feeling depressed, I often choose to enjoy the novel part which includes a lot of imaginative stories. These stories can relieve my stress and broaden my horizon. Besides, I even submitted my own fiction to Youth. Refused as I was, I still received some great encouragement, which gives me confidence to be a writer.
I do expect Youth can publish more classic works and have a promising future.
【解析】
【分析】本文是一篇应用文,向校刊Youth表达自己的经历,并送上自己的祝福。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建立:found→establish
沮丧的:upset→depressed
得到:receive→obtain
赏析:enjoy→appreciate
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句:These stories can relieve my stress and broaden my horizon.
拓展句:Not only can these stories relieve my stress, but also they can broaden my horizon.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
When feeling depressed, I often choose to enjoy the novel part which includes a lot of imaginative stories. (运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]
Refused as I was, I still received some great encouragement, which gives me confidence to be a writer. (运用了as引导的让步状语从句还运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
12.2021年6月甲卷 参考范文
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
[自我介绍及写信事由] How’s everything going? I am Li Hua, a Chinese friend of yours. Our school is going to launch a class meeting themed “Chinese Traditional Culture”, which will be shown on an English website. Now I am writing to obtain your detailed advice about it.
[征询具体信息] As is known to all, China has abundant and unique traditional cultures with a rich history, such as tea culture, Peking opera, cheongsam, the Chinese calligraphy, the Chinese knot and so on. What’s more, there are many historical places of interest, like the Great Wall of China, the famous West Lake, etc. Would you be so kind to tell me which attracts you most so that our meeting can gain great success?
[表达感谢、期待回复] Thanks again for your time, and I’m looking forward to your earliest reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
13.2021年6月乙卷 参考范文
【参考范文】
Be smart online learners
With the popularity of the Internet, learning online is being accepted by more and more people.  
The reasons are as follows. First of all, it is convenient since we can learn whatever we need whenever necessary and wherever we are, as long as we have an access to the Internet. Secondly, compared with learning at school, learning online cost less, which is good news for those with financial stress. Besides, if you are a shy person, online study can make you relaxed.However, we must be aware of the possibility that some teenagers may get addicted in computer games without effective supervision.
Therefore, I think it significant t for parents to supervise teenagers before helping them develop a good habit of using the web.  
14.2021年6月浙江 参考范文
【题型分析】
这是一篇提纲式作文,其命题形式是应用文中的宣传稿,可以用书信形式来呈现所要表达的内容。写作的内容是关于“昨天你参观了学生举办的国画作品展”及其观展感受与推荐观展,即有感而发地写一篇词数80左右的宣传稿。该话题与我们的生活息息相关,因此考生写作起来会有感而发。从题型上分析,本题属于半开放式作文,考生需要从简单的材料罗列到高层次的立意,并进行深度的思考,写作内容具有一定想象的空间。考生必须根据题干中规定的内容加以适当的发挥,并准确地表达展览时间、地点以及观展感受及推荐观展,以凸显考生的语言交际能力以及用英语构建与谋篇布局能力和表达能力。命题方式也体现了对英语学科核心素养中语言能力、文化意识和思维品质方面的考查。
【参考范文】
Dear editor,
I m writing to tell you something about what I thought and felt after I visited the students Chinese painting exhibition held by our school yesterday.
As far as I know, this exhibition will last for half a month in the school art gallery.What strikes me most is that their gifts for art are extrerrely shocking. I am deeply impressed by their talents for painting.Therefore, I strongly recommend that all the students in our school should make use of their spare time to enjoy these wanderful works carefully. I believe everyone will be sure to have a good time there.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文点评】
范文首先先告知写信的目的,揭示主题,其次简要地回顾了自己昨天观看学生国画作品展的过程,最后写自己的感受以及自己的建议。
15.2021年1月浙江 参考范文
【参考范文】
Distinguished guests:
On behalf of our school, I would like to convey my sincere welcome for your visiting.
At first, it is of significance to fully understand the school. As scheduled, all of you will visit the museum, which contains the splendid history of our school. Furthermore, our classes are worthy of being attended, because you can appreciate the differences between Chinese and western teaching methods. After that, it is at canteen that you can have a special lunch with our students.
As mentioned above, I extremely expect your coming. May you have an unforgettable experience.

Dear New Zealand friends,      
   To begin with, please allow me to extend our warmest welcome on behalf of our school !
   Various activities will be arranged to enhance our mutual understanding and experience different cultures. As scheduled,we will hold a talent show where everyone has the platform to show his or her outstanding performance. Our opera club members can’t wait to put on their latest opera, Qu Yuan,  a well-known Chinese ancient poet and scholar. After that, it is highly recommended that you should take a look at our creative scientific research. Additionally, we would like to show you around our school.
    I sincerely hope you have a fantastic and fabulous time with us and wish you a meaningful and fruitful journey.Thank you.
【解析】
【分析】
本文是一篇应用文,要求考生写一篇发言稿,向即将到校的新西兰学生致欢迎辞。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1.表示欢迎;
2.介绍活动安排;
3.表达祝愿。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
on behalf of; would like to; convey; sincere welcome; be of significance; splendid; be worthy of; appreciate; teaching methods; canteen; extremely expect; unforgettable
第三步:连词成句
1. On behalf of our school, I would like to convey my sincere welcome for your visiting.
2. At first, it is of significance to fully understand the school.
3. As scheduled, all of you will visit the museum, which contains the splendid history of our school.
4. Furthermore, our classes are worthy of being attended, because you can appreciate the differences between Chinese and western teaching methods.
5. After that, it is at canteen that you can have a special lunch with our students.
6. As mentioned above, I extremely expect your coming.
7. May you have an unforgettable experience.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:at first
2.表并列补充关系:Furthermore
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
As scheduled, all of you will visit the museum, which contains the splendid history of our school. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]
After that, it is at canteen that you can have a special lunch with our students. (运用了强调句型)

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