读后续写21种场景句型积累与句子仿写（上）

【读后续写】读后续写21种场景句型积累与句子仿写（上）

场景 1 表示“情绪与情感”

1. a flush of（表情绪的名词） 一阵……

= a wave of

= a feeling/sense of

2. joy / excitement / pride / anger / rage / panic / terror / sorrow / sadness / grief / guilt / disappointment / embarrassment / shame

仿写：

1) 当他看着自己孩子的时候，一种强烈的自豪感涌上心头（十分自豪）。

①A flush of pride swept over him as he watched his children.

②He felt a flush of pride as he watched his children.

2) 我感到高兴极了。

A wave of happiness flooded over me.

3) 他感到非常恐慌。

①A flush of panic spread across him.

②A flush of fear flooded/swept over him.

场景 2表示“（因为紧张、害怕）心跳”

sb. could feel one’s heart pounding wildly in one’s chest. (pounding / beating / racing) (wildly / loudly / hard) 感到心在胸中怦怦直跳

仿写：

1) 上台领奖时我感到心怦怦直跳。

I could feel my heart pounding as I went on stage to collect the prize.

2) 我的心开始咚咚跳，嘴里发干。

My heart started to beat, and my mouth was dry.

3) 他打开信，心在咚咚跳着。

He unfolded the letter, his heart racing.

场景 3表示“流泪”

1. Tears blurred one’s eyes. 泪眼模糊

= One’s eyes got misty.

= One’s eyes misted / dimmed with tears.

2. ... be close to tears 几乎要哭了

3. tears (roll down one’s eyes / cheeks / face) 泪水落下

仿写：

1) 当得知我被重点大学录取时，我妈差点儿就哭了。

My mother was close to tears when she heard I was admitted to a key university.

2) 他站在一个角落里，泪流满面。

He stood in a corner with tears rolling down his face.

场景 4表示“因……颤抖”

tremble / shiver / shake (with fear, panic, excitement, rage ...)

仿写：

1) 她双唇颤抖着，泪珠顺着面颊滚落下来。

Her lips shivered and big tears rolled down her cheeks.

2) 他握紧拳头，气得发抖。

He clenched his fists, trembling with rage.

3) 他躺在那里很长时间，害怕得发抖。

He lay there for a long time, shivering with fear.

场景 5表示“好像……”

1. It was like doing sth. 好像……

2. It seemed as if/ that ... 好像……

仿写：

1) 我似乎觉得所有的希望都破灭了。

It seemed to me that all hope faded / died.

2) 我们聊呀聊呀，就像遇到了久别的朋友一样。

We talked and talked, and it was like meeting a long-lost friend.

3) 好像进入了另一个世界。

It was like entering another world.

4) 我丢了工作，感觉我的世界崩溃了。

①I lost my job and it was like my world collapsed.

②I lost my job and it seemed as if the world was at an end.

场景 6表示“不知道做……”

1. sb. did sth., wondering what to do next.

2. sb. did sth., not knowing what to do next.

3. sb. did sth., unsure of what to do next.

4. sb. was at a loss what to do. 手足无措

5. sb. was in a dilemma about whether to do or not. 感到难以决定……

仿写：

1) 他吃惊地站在那里，不知道接下来做什么。

He stood there in shock, unsure what to do next.

2) 老师突然出现，他不知所措。

The teacher suddenly appeared, and he was at a loss what to do.

场景 7表示“某人想到/明白……；某人有了主意”

1. It suddenly occurred to sb. + that从句

= It hit sb. + that从句

= It struck sb. + that从句

= It dawned on sb. + that从句

2. (idea, thought ...) occurred / came to sb.

= ... came / flashed into one’s mind

= ... crowded in one’s mind

3. one’s mind began to race 头脑开始快速转动

仿写：

1)我突然意识到我并不需要这些东西来让自己快乐。

It suddenly dawned on me that I didn’t really need these things to be happy.

2) 突然他想到一个好主意。

Suddenly a brilliant idea flashed into his mind.

3) 他的头脑开始快速转动，试图想出办法。

His mind began to race, trying to think of a way out.

4) 我突然想到我没有锁门。

It struck me that I had left the door unlocked.

场景 8表示“直到……才意识到……”

1. 倒装句：Not until + 时间状语 + did sb. realize/notice + that从句

2. 强调句：It was only + 时间状语 + that sb. realized + that从句

仿写：

1) 直到那时他才意识到有什么不对劲。

①Not until then did he realize that something was wrong.

②It was only then that he realized that something was wrong.

2) 他这才恍然大悟，他哥哥想为他买圣诞礼物。

①Not until then did he realize that his elder brother wanted to buy a present for him.

②It was only then that he realized that his elder brother wanted to buy a present for him.

3) 直到那一刻，他才注意到包里什么也没留下。

Not until at that moment did he notice that there was nothing left in his bag.

4) 直到那时她才感觉到她的肚子在咕咕叫。

It was only then that she felt that her stomach was growling.

场景 9表示“迫不及待做……；毫不犹豫”

1. sb. could hardly wait to do sth.

2. without a second thought 不假思索；毫不犹豫地

3. without even thinking

4. without delay 立即；毫不迟延地

5. without hesitation 毫不犹豫

仿写：

1) 他迫不及待地要赶回家将一切告诉他的父母。

He could hardly wait to get back home and tell his parents everything.

2) 水冰冷冰冷，可那个年轻人想也没想就跳了进去。

The water was freezing cold, but without a second thought the young man jumped in.

3) 她迫不及待地想见Colin，把早上的一切都告诉她。

She couldn’t wait to see Colin and told everything about her morning.

4) 他毫不迟疑地迅速爬上树去摘树叶。

Without delay, he climbed up the tree quickly to reach for the leaf.

场景 10表示“一……，就……”

1. Upon (doing) sth., …

2. The moment/instant + 从句, …

3. Hardly had sb. done … when … did …

仿写：

1) 听了这个滑稽的故事，大家都哈哈大笑。

Upon hearing the funny story, everybody burst into laughter.

2) 我一看见他，就知道他就是那个曾经帮我搬过箱子的警察。

The instant I saw him, I knew he was the policeman who had helped me carry the box.

3) 我刚走进房间就听见了巨大的声音。

Hardly had I entered the room when I heard loud noise.

4) 一听到“救命”的喊声，他冲出了房子。

Upon hearing shouts of “help”, he dashed out of the house.