2023届高考英语应用文增分技巧 导学案

2023届高考英语应用文增分技巧 导学案

Learning plan—How can we write a good composition?
Name______________    Class_________________
Learning objectives:
1.Knowledge & skills: students are able to grasp the three stages of writing a good composition, that is, subject and structure, details and polishing.
2.Process& methods: students are able to follow the teacher to finish the three stages of the sample composition. After that, they can finish the writing processes of a new given composition.
3.Affect& values: students are able to feel much relieved before writing an English composition even an exam and know exactly what they should do while writing a composition.
Learning procedure:
1.Judge two samples of composition
2.Three stages of writing a composition:
Stage 1   Subject & structure    审题谋篇
Stage 2   details               增加细节
Stage 3   polishing             润色习作
Finish the following blanks：
假如你是李华，收到美国表妹Andy的电子邮件，提及她父母想看她的微信朋友圈（Wechat Moments），她对是否应与他们分享感到犹豫。请给她回信，要点如下：
    1. 观点（赞成或反对）；2. 主要理由；3. 提出建议。
    注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Stage 1：审题谋篇
审题
定体裁   
定人称   
定时态   
谋篇
Para.1   
Para.2   
Para.3   
Stage 2：增加细节
Para.1:
我已经收到了你的电子邮件。 _______________________________________________
我已经收到了你的电子邮件。你提到你的父母想看你的微信朋友圈，你在犹豫要不要与他们分享。
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Para.2:
对你来说与父母分享朋友圈很重要。_______________________________________________
对你来说与父母分享朋友圈很重要，因为这会让你们更亲近。________________________________________
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对你来说与父母分享朋友圈很重要，因为这会让你们更亲近。所以我建议你多给机会让父母进入你的世界。
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Para.3:
希望你能采纳我的建议。_______________________________________________
希望你能采纳我的建议。直到敞开心扉你才会与父母更好地交流。 ___________________________________
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   希望你能采纳我的建议。直到敞开心扉你才会与父母更好地交流。代我向你父母问好。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Stage 3: 润色习作
1.加上合适的词，把这三句话合并成一句话，用上定语从句和并列宾语从句:   
I have received your e-mail. You mentioned that your parents wanted to see your Wechat Moments. You are
hesitating about whether to share it with them.
2.用高级词汇替换下列句子中的某些词汇：
   It is important for you to share Wechat Moments with your parents, because it will make you and your parents much closer. So I suggest that you give more chances to let your parents get into your world.
3.把下列句子变成倒装句或强调句：
You will not have a better communication with your parents until you open your heart.
3. practice：
假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter近期打算来中国，他对中国的乡村生活很感兴趣。你打算邀请他体验一下你家乡的农家乐。请用英文写信向他推荐，要点如下：
1.农家乐兴起的原因；2. 农家乐的服务特色。
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 参考词汇：农家乐 agritainment。
Stage 1：审题谋篇
审题
定体裁   
定人称   
定时态   
谋篇
Para.1   
Para.2   
Para.3   
Stage 2：增加细节
Para.1: _______________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Para.2:________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Para.3: _______________________________________________________________________________________
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Stage 3: 润色习作，连句成篇
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
4.homework:
假设你是高三学生李华，今年参加高考，考后面临填报志愿，你一直想当老师，可父母的愿望是希望你当医生。请用英语给你在美国的叔叔写封信，陈述你的愿望和理由，请求叔叔帮忙，说服你的父母。要点如下：
1.受好老师的影响，喜欢和同学相处；2. 教师受人尊敬，有寒暑假等。
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。