【读后续写】新高考读后续写分步专练 20阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Laurie sat quietly in the empty dressing room. She had not competed since the accident. As she waited for her turn to skate, Laurie was very nervous. Today was very important in her comeback (复出). “If I can win today,” she thought, “I can skate in the World Cup next year.”
Before Laurie had her accident, everyone had said that she was the one to beat.
She thought back to that car accident where her right knee was badly injured. She spent six total months on recovery, treatment and practice because she hoped to regain her skill.
“Hello, Laurie,” one of her friends burst in. “How’s the knee? Is it going to slow you down?”
“I guess we’ll find out tonight,” Laurie said.
“There’s a girl named Jinny, strong in everything. She’s the only real competitor you have to beat,” the friend said and hurried out.
Hearing that, Laurie decided to show her most difficult jump. “If I don’t try it, I won’t stand a chance,” she thought. “Does anyone believe that I can still win?”
Suddenly her right knee sent pain up and down her leg. The doctor said it would do that for a while. “What makes you think you have a chance tonight?” she said to herself.
After the pain passed, she moved slowly to warm up. Then she said firmly, “I must win!”
At that moment, a young woman hurried in with a skate equipment bag. She put some of her belongings onto a chair. Her bag fell to the floor. “Hi, I’m Jinny Jordan,” she said.
Laurie felt uncomfortable as she looked at Jinny. “So this is my competitor,” thought Laurie. “Because of her, I may lose tonight.”
“I’m Laurie Collins,” Laurie told Jinny. “Something fell out of your bag, Jinny.”
As Jinny began to gather her belongings, the door opened.
“Jinny,” someone called, “your tape of music is missing. You are the next one! Laurie, after Jinny.”
“Oh, my God! I thought I had handed it in hours ago, the green box with my name on it,” screamed Jinny, hurrying out.
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【思路延伸——译一译】
1. 突然,她看见椅子下面有东西。她弯腰捡起它。
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2. “Jinny的绿盒子,”她喊道。“一定是从包里滚出来的。”Laurie一动不动地站着。
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3. “如果Jinny没有她的音乐。“她会输的,她是我唯一真正的竞争对手。”想到这一点,Laurie微微发抖了一下。
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4. 然后她想,“我真的这么想赢吗?”Laurie犹豫了一会儿。
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5. 然后她急忙出去给Jinny音乐磁带。Jinny感激Laurie,成功地完成了滑冰。
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6. 尽管她很紧张,但她还是想随着音乐滑。
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7. 然后她跳了最难的一跳。“很好,”她心想,“我的右膝撑住了。”
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8. 音乐结束时,全场掌声雷动。
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9. 当分数出现时,Laurie知道她达到了目标。
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10. 当她走回更衣室时,Laurie想起了Jinny的音乐磁带。
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11. 没有人会知道我是多么接近失败,”Laurie轻声自言自语地说。
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【小试牛刀——写一写】
Paragraph 1:
“Music is so important to the skating,” Laurie said thoughtfully, doing some preparation alone in the dressing room. _______________________________________________________
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Paragraph 2:
Minutes later, Laurie glided to the centre of the stadium when her name was called. ______
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参考答案 【思路延伸——译一译】
1. Suddenly, she saw something under a chair. She bent over to pick it up.
2. “Jinny’s green box,” she exclaimed. “It must have rolled out of her bag.” Laurie stood motionlessly.
3. “If Jinny doesn’t have her music, she will lose. She is my only real competitor.” Laurie shivered slightly as she thought about this.
4. Then she wondered, “Do I really want to win so much?” Laurie hesitated for a second.
5. Then she hurried out to give Jinny her music tape. Jinny was grateful to Laurie, and finished the skating successfully.
6. Nervous as she was, she tried to skate in time with her music.
7. Then she did her most difficult jump. “Good,” she thought to herself, “my right knee’s holding up.”
8. As the music ended, applause filled the stadium.
9. When the marks appeared, Laurie knew she achieved her goal.
10. As she walked back to the dressing room, Laurie thought about Jinny’s music tape.
11. “No one will know how close I really came to losing,” Laurie said softly to herself.
【小试牛刀——写一写】
Paragraph 1:
“Music is so important to the skating,” Laurie said thoughtfully, doing some preparation alone in the dressing room. Suddenly, she saw something under a chair. She bent over to pick it up. “Jinny’s green box,” she exclaimed. “It must have rolled out of her bag.” Laurie stood motionlessly. “If Jinny doesn’t have her music, she will lose. She is my only real competitor.” Laurie shivered slightly as she thought about this. Then she wondered, “Do I really want to win so much?” Laurie hesitated for a second. Then she hurried out to give Jinny her music tape. Jinny was grateful to Laurie, and finished the skating successfully.
Paragraph 2:
Minutes later Laurie glided to the centre of the stadium when her name was called. Nervous as she was, she tried to skate in time with her music. Then she did her most difficult jump. “Good,” she thought to herself, “my right knee’s holding up.” As the music ended, applause filled the stadium. When the marks appeared, Laurie knew she achieved her goal. As she walked back to the dressing room, Laurie thought about Jinny’s music tape. “No one will know how close I really came to losing,” Laurie said softly to herself.
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